Mistakes than can wreck even the best fundraising stories

Telling stories that move donors to action is not easy. In fact, a lot of otherwise good stories get torpedoed by simple errors, such as these pointed out by John Haydon at 5 Biggest Nonprofit Storytelling Mistakes to Avoid:

1. Bragging about your nonprofit. (If your story is just a vehicle for bragging about your awesomeness, it's really not a story at all.)
   
2. No protagonist. (The stories that move people the most are about one person and their struggle.)
   
3. No problem. (Struggle, problem, conflict. It's not a story without.
   
4. No payoff. (A real story goes somewhere.)
   
5. Jargon. (It's easy to use your own ways of talking about your cause and thus become incomprehensible to your donors.)
   

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