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Staring at a blank screen, trying to start your fundraising letter? Try these tips from the Better Fundraising blog, at Five Tips for the First Sentence of Your Next Appeal Letter:

  1. Short and Sweet (make sure your first sentence is easy to understand)
  2. Drama, Drama, Drama
  3. What’s The Point? (try: "I'm writing to you today because ...")
  4. Who Cares? (try "I know you care about...")
  5. Less is More (after you’ve written your first draft, delete your first few sentences; this almost always improves it)


from Future Fundraising Now http://ift.tt/2tQAi88

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